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OR reading card - 3/3/11

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Language Arts I & II:  Outside Reading Response Rubric

REQUIRED ELEMENTS:          1) Photoshop Graphic,

Dimensions: 4”x6”                     2) Title & Author, (DO NOT put your name in the graphic!)

Resolution: 150-300                  3) Conflict,

Your Name as file name                        4) Resolution,    

Score	Description of Response:  Interpretive Stance
4	My selected quote does an excellent job of capturing the major insight of the novel.  My statement of main conflict and resolution shows my thorough understanding of the novel.  My Photoshop graphic does an excellent job of illustrating my text and the overall layout of the card shows my exceptional skill at graphic design.
3	My selected quote accurately expresses the major insight of the novel.  My statement of main conflict and resolution shows a basic understanding of the novel.  My  Photoshop graphic illustrates my text and the overall layout of the card shows my competence with graphic design.
2	My selected quote expresses an idea from the novel, but it may not necessarily be the major insight or it may not be the best or most concise expression of it. My statement of main conflict and resolution shows some understanding of the novel, but may contain inaccuracies or may be incomplete. My card does contain a Photoshop graphic but it is not the most effective or relevant to the ideas on the card.
1	My selected quote is from the novel, but it does not seem to capture any insight or concept from the novel.  I state a conflict and resolution, but they may contain inaccuracies or may be incomplete. My card does contain a  Photoshop graphic but it may not be the most effective or relevant to the ideas on the card.
0	My writing does not seem to match the assignment and shows a lack of understanding of the novel.  My response may be confusing and difficult to understand.  My  Photoshop graphic may be “generic,” may not show much effort, or may be missing.
4	Student Self-Assessment I feel that my image does the book justice in summarization and that the quote gives the main idea of the book, as well as the graphic illustrating the text and showing my skill in graphic design. It shows the conflict and resolution of Jumper, as well as plot points. Zachary Chock
	Teacher Assessment

            Zachary Chock                         5) Significant Quote

Tuesday, February 8, 2011

Draft of poem

Shadow

I am a shadow on the wall,
silent, dark, lonely,
I imitate what my body does,
Every movement,
Every twitch,
Every turn,
I follow my leader, loyal to the orders,
I am friendly, compassionate,
not well known.
I stay out of trouble,
Watch from the sides,
as life unfolds in front of me.
I disappear when the darkness falls
and light drifts away.