As I finish the school year, I look back at how far I've come over these past two years. I have developed a lot, mostly in progression of being able to put my skills to use, and showing my knowledge of the GLOS and benchmarks in my work. I feel that I have shown and proven my use of the six GLOS in my evidence and portfolio, and have learned much in the fields of integrated technology through Biology, History, Physics, English 1 & 2, and Hawaiian History. What can I say? Even though the path was tough and challenging, it was worth it, and overall, fun.
Farewell, Menemac Core. It's been fun.
- Z
Website Portfolio:
http://www.wix.com/thatzachary117/thatzachary117
The past is easier than the present...
What piece of writing did you like best in my portfolio and why? Project Icarus Journal #3 - It gave an insight into your mind that I never knew existed. You are a very quiet person who I rarely see expressing yourself - I was very impressed with your style of writing and deep thinking. It shows that you have passion and when you find the things that turn you on, you are able to throw in a lot of your energies into pursuing your passions.
ReplyDeleteWhat did you like about my portfolio and sharing and what would you like to see me improve on? I loved the creative writing; the deep thinking that went into expressing yourself; your style of presentation - the art was very impressive. I loved the way that you were able to demonstrate the GLOS objectives; how you met them; and be able to demonstrate to me in a visual way, what you have learned and how you are able to apply it in your schooling. The only thing that I would like you to work on is to be able to support and give stronger evidence on why you take a certain position on argument/position papers.
Which of the writing traits (ideas, organization, voice, word choice) do you feel was most successful for me? It was great to see how you are able to communicate your ideas (ideas), using descriptive words (word choice) to enhance your writings.
Which of the traits of writing would you like me to improve on in the coming semester? I would like to see you work a little more on your organization of ideas..you have great ideas but it would be nice to organize it a little better to give a clearer overall picture of what you are trying to communicate.