Biking Essay:
In the Biking essay, I applied the trait for "Ideas" through my writing as I introduce new knowledge, views and my take on biking issues in Hawaii using information and research in the essay such as in my second paragraph, when I use Zachary Manago's death as an example for the argument saying that we should have a safe area for the road, and support it with other complaints shared by bikers, in the third paragraph. I introduced the idea in the first paragraph about the deaths and accidents of bikers, just related to car and bike collisions so the reader knows more about the subject.
Position Essay:
In this essay, I use arguing sides from people who consume soda, and compare that with arguments from health organizations that study the consumption of soda, and explain it in the first paragraph. I was able to draw new ideas from details and studies done on taxing soda's benefits to the economy, and it's impacts on Americans and obesity in my second paragraph, as I try to explain my new thoughts about how taxing sodas can benefit our economy, while lowering obesity and reducing disease rates caused by high sugar intakes.
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